LR

Mr bush www

  • Excellent opening
  • Good sound affects
  • POV shots
  • Excellent cinematography use of close up 
  • Fade to black during sequence 
  • Effective lighting at night
  • Camerawork- steady and well exposed
  • Fade to black in end 

EBI
  • Accuracy of writing 
  • Include diagetic sound 
  • Impact
  • Framing of "if you shot"



Peer feedback

WWW

  • Very good editing 
  • Excellent acting
  • Clear narrative 
  • Good acting
  • Camerawork was good
  • Clear audio 
  • Amazing visuals and sound
  • Parallel sound was good
  • Good use of close up

EBI

  • Too short
  • Spelling mistake
  • Use other audio
  • Trim soundtrack
  • Should not make it 2 minute 
Over all i feel like my editing was very good for example how I edited the opening was done very well also the different shots that I used were also done to the best it could. However i should've made the video a little bit longer and I should also double check my work so that I can make sure there arnt any mistakes 

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