EBI: The tracking shots could've been better. At some shots the quality went really low The acting could've been better in some scenes The camera movements could've been better in some shots. WWW: The story plot is very interesting also the narrative was very clear to follow The sound used in the video went a long very well with the video and synced in perfectly. Also the use of lighting in some shots was very good. The gun used in the video was very realistic The whole sequence was very Teachers Feedback: WWW: Post production (Use of titles at start/ short film convention). Start with close up - Enigma code. Use of fade out between scenes. Narrative - Well constructed + efficient. Use of dissolves. Very efficient music - atmospheric/climatic. Flashing image/strobe effect. Sound effects - gun shots. Pan up body at end. EBI: Blur/out of focus. Performance - more convincing. After effects. smooth.
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