EBI:

  • The tracking shots could've been better.
  • At some shots the quality went really low
  • The acting could've been better in some scenes 
  • The camera
  •  movements could've been better in some shots.




WWW:

  • The story plot is very interesting also the narrative was very clear to follow
  • The sound used in the video went a long very well with the video and synced in perfectly. 
  • Also the use of lighting in some shots was very good.
  • The gun used in the video was very realistic
  • The whole sequence was very Teachers Feedback:

    WWW:
    • Post production (Use of titles at start/ short film convention).
    • Start with close up - Enigma code.
    • Use of fade out between scenes.
    • Narrative -  Well constructed + efficient.
    • Use of dissolves.
    • Very efficient music - atmospheric/climatic.
    • Flashing image/strobe effect.
    • Sound effects - gun shots.
    • Pan up body at end.
    EBI:
    • Blur/out of focus.
    • Performance - more convincing.
    • After effects.
    smooth.                                                                               

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