Media Coursework

Rise up script [Establishing shot (pan) of location] Moses: (Woken up from a Phone call) Yo?                                                 [Over the shoulder shot of MK walking to location] Remy: Yo where are you get here now  Moses: Ive just woken up I cant leave the house why whats wrong is everything calm? Remy: It's MG (pause for a while) He's dead he was stabbed last night. Moses: Im on my way                                            [Change of location, switches to Remz,] Remy: Who did it , who killed him? YS: Apparently it was Madmax's younger                          [All the gang is standing together] Remy: Ima get the drop on him find out where he's gonna be later. YS: Im gonna be the one to finish him though                         [Moses appears from darkness] Moses: Na you man are gonna leave him, hes mine  

1) Type up your teacher's feedback  in full  plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class . WWW: -Great P.O.V shots -close ups -music sound effects -Great shots in general EBI: -Video was way too long -Have better quality -Audio at the start was not loud enough 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write  three  WWW bullet points and  three  EBI bullet points for your TV drama scene. WWW: -The P.O.V shots that were use were done very well - The overall concept -  Music sound EBI: -Need to cut the video down from 2 minutes, too long. -Audio dialogue 3) How effectively did you complete the objective you laid out in your mini preliminary exercise  statement of intent ? I think i did complete the  objectives  i laid out in my  mini  preliminary  good enough as it was related to my concept however if i could do it again than I would have done it better in